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Chapter Two
heat, tables, water
Provence · the Côte d'Azur · date to come
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The long middle of the trip, measured in lunches that went on too far into the afternoon.
Opening paragraph, written once the photographs and the voice note land. Where the morning started, what the light was doing, the first coffee of the day.
The main movement of this chapter: the journey, the meal, the crossing, the long afternoon, whatever carried it.
A lighter human aside. The joke that kept coming back, the small disaster, the thing nobody planned.
The best of what was said at the time, tidied only enough to read.
Closing prose. Where the day landed, what the sky did, dinner, the sound of the place at night.
A short italic envoi, the feeling to leave on.